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Quite against standard protocols, Klingons come aboard under the guise of going to the communal facilities, they kidnap two people off the station. Meanwhile, the Senior staff are trying to determine ulterior reasons for the explosion of the human cargo vessel, the Dynamite.
Stargate Universe is a non-canon Stargate RPG set in the year 2021.
Storyline
The year is 2021, and almost everything has changed in this timeline. And you have just become a part of it...
With no longer an Ori threat in the Milky Way Galaxy, SG-1 was reassigned. In the Pegasus Galaxy, the Atlantis Expedition are still fighting the Wraith and searching the galaxy for new allies and new technology to aid them and Earth. Mitchell is promoted to a full bird Colonel and is given command of the USS Odyssey, the flagship of Earths fleet. Teal'c goes back to help rebuild the Jaffa Nation and helps Bra'tac lead the Jaffa nation to a new future. Doctor Jackson gets his wish and is made leader of Atlantis as Richard Woolsey is called back to Earth to become the leader of the IOA. Carter is given command of the General Hammond before being promoted to Brigader General two years later and is given command of the SGC as Hank Landry retires and become the new President of the United States and Jack O'Neill is made the Cheif of Staff. John Sheppard is given command of the USS Daedalus after being promoted to to a full bird Colonel after Colonel Caldwell is reassigned back to Earth. McKay and Keller are still on Atlantis helping out when they are needed. Teyla and Ronon have left Atlantis and went to New Athos.
Two years after the most of the Asgard killed themselfs in a mass genoside and off-world base was formed one of the old asgard planets in the Ida Galaxy codenamed Echo site or PR5-T79. After ten years of setting up the base they discover that the planet used to house the ancients at one point. They discover a ancient city like the one that the Replicators in the Pegasus Galaxy had made. They name it Heliopolis, after the planet that Ernest Littlefield found in 1945. The Echo site team then moved into the city and the Ida Expidition was expanded with more personnel going to the Ida Galaxy, to explore the Ida Galaxy for what it has to offer.
Destiny Expidition
But After unlocking the mystery of the Stargate's ninth chevron, a large expiditon of explorers travels to an unmanned starship called the Destiny, launched by the Ancients at the height of their civilization as a grand experiment set in motion, but never completed.
What starts as a simple reconnaissance turns into a never ending mission, as the Stargate Universe crew discovers the ship is unable to return to Earth, and they must now fend for themselves aboard the Destiny.
The crew will travel to the far reaches of the universe, connecting with each of the previously launched Stargates, thus fulfilling the Destiny's original mission. Challenges will arise though as the ship comes into range of Stargates placed centuries ahead of the Destiny and the crew is unable to control the ship's navigational schedule. If someone is left behind, there is no way to go back for them, adding to the drama of encountering new races, enemies and adventures.
Re: Fleet Admiral Kunama « Result #3 on Jan 15, 2009, 7:33pm »
79. Is now Nineteen 80. Her Star Trek library is coming together 81. Is nearing the end of her two years at Kingston College of Art & Design 82. Hopes to begin Uni in UCA Epsom, UCA Farnham or even Kingston University in September
I'm afraid your "soon" was not up to the mark and your account with us will be terminated. Our reasons for the termination of your account is that your level of literacy is not up to the standards we have asked for, and you have failed to complete your application to the fullest extent and therefore not done your character any justice, in the time allotment we gave you. You have not notified me of a reason for delay and evidently you don't deem the application important enough to have posted within a week.
If you are thinking of rejoining DS12, I would strongly suggest you improve your literacy skills before you try. I won't accept you again if you try with the same level it is now, and the account IP address will be banned from being able to come onto this site.
P.S. Your account with the Sovereign's Continuum will also be deleted, along with any other posts you have made. And the same goes for DS12 too.
Re: Kash Wilson « Result #6 on Jan 8, 2009, 3:29pm »
It's a little better than previous but you still need to work on your history a little more.
How long was he Borg for? Where was he born again? "S,A" would say South America to me, and CA I presume is California but California is in North America and not South America. So... please clarify that in full, please no abbreviations. I would like to see a little more elaboration on his friends and enemies. Who are they? How did they come to know or meet each other? In case of enemies, why do they not get along? Other than that, I would like to see the role play sample up soon. Please make sure that you try to use correct punctuation and grammar. I noticed that you have done so above but you don't have a lot to be a big worry. You would be surprised to know just how many people use "there" whey they mean "their" or "your" when they mean "you're". ^^
Re: Kash Wilson « Result #8 on Jan 7, 2009, 1:32pm »
For clarification, if your are applying for a Civilian position, replace that 'In Character' part to the Civilian Code bit. We still need the User Information from you which should include a role play sample preferably as the character you wish to join as. Please view the scenario board and see if there is one that can apply to you. The sample is so that we can determine for ourselves whether your level of literacy is suitable to what we're accustomed.
You can copy the user information from the link provided by Foleco and paste it into your post. Don't make a reply, click "Modify" and then proceed as normal.
Also, I would suggest that you add to his Skills/Talents - Surely he has more than just one? History - Whilst that may be the case, you can still make it detailed to explain how he was assimilated, where was he assimilated, where on Earth was he born, who were his parents and their career? What was he like before his assimilation? You have left out rather a lot of information that would greatly help you to be accepted. Nationality relates to his birthplace, was he French? German? Norwegian? Texan?
Why would a civilian be a Marine? Are you sure you have applied to the right form? Marine and Starfleet applications must be made from the correct code - see given link. Wouldn't a Privateer, or a trader or questionable personality or something like that be more appropriate? Being a Marine would have required him to have joined the Marine Core, which then would be in his history.
Please add more to his personality. It looks unfinished and his personality makes him who he is. He may be Borg, but then he will still have a certain individuality. Include what he was like before being Assimilated.
Is a black shirt all he wears? Surel he has a bigger wardrobe than that?
Name: Kash Race: Borg Race Description: {Only applies if your race is one you made up} Age: 21 Gender: Male Appearance:Muscular/ 5'11/175lbs/dirty blonde/light blue eyes/Borg scanner(right eye)/ Mechanical arm(left)/ Recharger(back of neck) Role: Marine Job Description: Attacking with or Defending station. Strengths and Weaknesses: Pro: Strong/intelligent/isn't affected by emotions most of the time/Neg's: forgetful at times/Has a hard time understanding some people/Is not good with words. Hobbies and Interests: Games/Excercise/VR/Combat History: Kash was born on Earth in S,A CA where he grew up with his parents and twin brother Kole. When he was 18 he joined the Marines,as was his family tradition, where he quickly moved up in rank. It was to little to late however when during a battle with the Borg he was taken and assimilated into there ranks. His time with the Borg transformed him mentally and physically. He has a almost patriotic attitude to being a Borg as well as a Marine. During a raid on his sphere Kash was freed by the crew of the USS Reliant. From there he was "rehabilitated" to a point similar to that of seven of nine. It turned out that he was more individualistic than thought, quickly making freinds and enemys. Kash was then transferred to Tankara as a Major in the Marines.
User Information:
Name: K-Bomb Gender: M How long have you been role playing?: 3 years What other sites do you role play on?: {Stargate Oblivion Role Play Sample:
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
Going on the SS Free is a hobby of my character.
Thank you for at least submitting one but I am appalled to find this incomplete and the lack of detail.
1. I have not ever heard of a human being called "Xgmx" in past or present and I doubt the 23rd Century has that name either. The name doesn't even sound like a name. If he is a human, does he not have a surname too?
2. The lack of good Punctuation and Grammar is worrisome as well. Please revise.
3. Marines have plenty of jobs within the station and whilst they do help Security with defending the station, it isn't just what they do. You can wiki it or consult the pages on Startrek.com
4. WE DO NOT ALLOW MARY SUEs/GARY STUs CHARACTERS. Why? Because NO-ONE is perfect. You as a person have faults, and you most certainly do if you think you can get away with "Good at just about everything". Strengths and Weaknesses help to define a character. Take Escalus from Romeo and Juliet. He tries to rule fairly in the fair city of Verona but he fails in his methods of discipline. It what makes that character who they are. What are his strengths? What are his weaknesses? I want to see this revised or you will have no hope of becoming a full member of the site. it also proves to me that you have not fully read the Rules and Regulations. I would strongly advise you go and read them. They are set there for a good reason. Namely this application.
5. Hobbies and Interests... 5a. What is SS Free? and Is it REALLY viable in the Star Trek realm and its communications? 5b. How come this character doesn't have a variety. People don't just have one interest or hobby. Take me for example, I enjoy horse riding, reading, writing, drawing. I am partial to swimming and I watch Rugby. Hobbies and Interests constitute a quantity, not a singular. Revise.
6. Please elaborate on the appearance. Do remember you can use a celebrity to help you with this. Just mention who they are. Don't use an anime/manga or sketch drawn picture. Just remember to supply a written description as well.
7. Where was he born on Earth? Who are his parents and what do they do? What education did he receive? Did he have any siblings or is he a lonely child? Does he have any friends? Why did he decide to join the Marine Core? What officers in the Core had an effect on him? Where was he stationed before be attached to DS12? What happened in his past to make him who he is today? "Was born on Earth, parents live there, started job at age of 18." does NOT constitute a valid historic entry.
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8. State roughly how many in numbers. E.G. For 3-6 years. You don't have to state exactly how many, just a rough idea.
9. Just SS Free? No others? I'm somewhat skeptical of that.
10. Prove that you are even capable of Role Playing. We have provided Scenarios if you need a push in the right direction. "Ya!" is not even a correct response for this. All that proves is that you can speak or type, which believe me, does NOT make you look the slightest bit intelligent. Provide me a sample as the character you are applying for. Choose a scenario, place your character in it and write me something that goes with that chosen scenario.
11. Unfinished applications require a "WIP" / "Incomplete" in the board title.
Conclusion
As it stands, and if this is not revised to our expectations, this application has failed. If you do not revise it within the week, your account with us will unfortunately be terminated. I was glad to see your initial enthusiasm for join but unfortunately, the goods weren't so great. If you bear any questions, just ask either of us and we'll get back to you.
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
Name: xgmx Race: Human Race Description: Age: 21 Gender: male Appearance: 135 pounds | 6 feet tall Role: Marine Job Description: defend Deep Space 12 Strengths and Weaknesses: good at just about everything Hobbies and Interests: going ont he SS Free History: Was born on Earth, parents live there, started job at age of 18.
User Information:
Name: Kevin McDonald Gender: male How long have you been role playing?: a few What other sites do you role play on?: SS Free Role Play Sample: Ya!
Re: ``all.fired C O U N T Y [affiliation] « Result #18 on Dec 11, 2008, 11:11pm »
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``all.fired C O U N T Y [affiliation] « Result #20 on Dec 9, 2008, 5:21pm »
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Lar [on the site: Tristan Turner, Madison Taylor, and Steven Tale]
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all.fired C O U N T Y
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One hundred years from the present, society as we know it has collapsed. Wars, plagues, famine…They’ve all taken their toll on the world. Governments have collapsed and new ones formed.
A new age is upon us:
Life that resembles the Wild West has taken place over the years after, almost all knowledge of before the fall was forgotten. Small towns live their lives, as normal as ever. People work their jobs, children play their games, and sheriffs protect them from the ever going groups of outlaws. The most infamous and their followers make the rules outside of the town (and sometimes in).
It’s such a trivial matter. Inlaws see them two ways. One: They’re evil, no good, dirty, rotten people! They rob banks, take advantage of women, burn things for no reason. Terrorists, they are! And on the other hand: They haven’t hurt me any. They don’t really do much. Depends on what side of the lucky coin you’re on. But how do the outlaws view it? You tell me.
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Re: SS Free « Result #22 on Dec 8, 2008, 12:54pm »
You'll remain accepted for a while, but PLEASE make a board for those linking back to SS Free, or place the DS12 Advertisement on a board yourself. You have a week.
The Captain's Personal Log « Result #24 on Dec 1, 2008, 1:13pm »
Entry 1 = December 01 2384
It's been a weird first few months captaining the Tankara but I don't think I'd request to change command. Even if that were possible at this present time, the station has grown on me as have her inhabitants. It's something different than to what I am used to. Why they thought a station-side command would suit me, I have not been informed. I'm usually in the Captain's chair on a Galaxy class or Nolfian class starship.
There's music playing and I have incense in the background. It's homey. Which reminds me, I have to send some letters home and to the Senate. Hm, Starfleet certainly got a kick when they learned my species were Republican imperialists. They keep sending me questions. It's almost amusing if it wasn't for the fact that the incoming calls are getting too constatn for my tastes.
I am confident the crew are up to the tasks set to them and everything is well at this present stage. I must say that Odan Thos is proving to be quite the officer and he's a newbie to the station. There is much promise in him. It still amazes me that so many militaristic races are getting along just fine... well, almost. The Klingons are always in a foul mood.
Joined: Jun 2008 Gender: Male Posts: 27 Location: Embry-Riddle (College) Karma: 0
Pilot's Log: Lieutenant Odan Shanu Thos « Result #26 on Nov 30, 2008, 8:20am »
Pilot's Log:
Lieutenant Odan Thos Personal Record
Entry 1: I just got my first letter from Liz as my transport came out of warp at Deep Space Twelve. To be honest at first I was confortable with her becoming close another guy; especially a famous one like Lieutenant Commander La Forge. My mother would say a little jealousy just reinforce my love, but I think my Father would be correct when he says jealousy will only destroy relationships. Really, I had no doubt Liz would make friends though, it is just in her personality and one of the things I love about her. On a lighter note, I am glad that that she is using the Sulta Mountain program. Maybe she well get good enough to take the west face next time either get enough leave to visit other.
When it comes to my posting at Deep Space Twelve, I wish it was going as well as Liz's. I truly think I may be a bad luck charm. I just got on the station, and before I could even meet the captain or make get to know my bunkmate, the Dynamite exploding on my. What a way to start my first patrol, and even worst there is still no evidence to the cause of the power loss. I feel I am letting the captain down. I have ran every test I could imagine and nothing seems to give any answers. If only Liz was here, she would know what to do. These types of puzzles don’t even phase her… Wait, computer attach Liz's Letter One to this entry and end log.
ATTACHMENT To: Lieutenant Odan Shanu Thos From: Lieutenant Elizabeth ‘Liz’ Sweetwater Location: Deep Space Twelve Classification: Personal Correspondence
Hello lov. I just got done with my first shift at the helm of the Enterprise. Everything is so great here; I do not know where I was going to begin this letter at first. I only figured it out after talking to Geordi.
I remember the hours we spent in the simulator flying the Sovereign class, but nothing really prepares you for the real thing. It does deserve the title of Sports Car of the Fleet. I only wish you could experience it.
Well, the crew has been extremely accepting of me, especially Geordi. Did you know he was the conn officer on the Enterprise-D. The captain tells me that Geordi is starting to finally come around to the lost of Data. It was hard on him, and I think my friendship could be helping him overcome it. As I told you, I went through the same problem when I left Jupiter Station, but while I could never replace Data I can help fill the void his lost left. Other then Geordi I met the other celebrity of the Enterprise, including Captain Riker and Diana Troy Riker before they left for the Titan. Then there was Doctor Crusher, B-4 and of course Captain Picard. They all are quite interesting and I will tell you more about them in my next letter.
From now I have to wrap up this, I have some holodeck time and want to try the north face of Sulta Mountain. I plan to spend our next date at the summit. Forever your love, Liz.
Joined: Jun 2008 Gender: Male Posts: 27 Location: Embry-Riddle (College) Karma: 0
Re: Odan has been gone and well be gone. « Result #27 on Nov 30, 2008, 4:43am »
I am shocked and a little puzzled that no one else has posted.
I am sorry I haven't, teacher dropped a massive paper (a Feasibility Report if you have taken a technical writing class) on use a week before finals... I think it was a cruel act which cost me the little time I had.
I currently have no life, but finals end the 12th and then I have my winter break. I am working on a post between sections of the paper, but it is comming along slowly.
Good luck and hope to see the other plot start up while I finish this semister.
Joined: Jun 2008 Gender: Male Posts: 27 Location: Embry-Riddle (College) Karma: 0
Odan has been gone and well be gone. « Result #29 on Nov 10, 2008, 8:30am »
I am sorry for my abstance lately. I had at lease two midterms every and I have Final along with a two major papers this week. However, it should be slowing down (Hopefully). So expect me back next week. Sorry again.
Stargate Oblivion « Result #30 on Oct 31, 2008, 3:01pm »
Stargate Oblivion is a Stargate SG-1 and SGA RPG board. It has been operating for a few years now and over the years more and more members have began to join the board and become part of the friendly community. It's your fate in your hands, will you help tip the balance of power within the galaxy or will you keep the balance and the flow? The choice is yours.
Key:
[MW]- Milky Way Galaxy Faction [P]- Pegasus Galaxy Faction
[MW][P]Tau'ri- Their star shimmers within the ever growing darkness within the Milky Way Galaxy. They have reformed under new leadership and continue their exploration off the galaxy. They have met many enemies along their path and seek to keep the balance within the galaxy and ensure that no one specific faction attempts to overpower the others. They defend the weak within the galaxy, the ones that are unable to defend themselves against the endless destruction and chaos that the Goa'uld reign down upon them when they attack the helpless. The tau'ri have been fighting against the Goa'uld for some time now and help those in need of assistance against them and attempt to show others that the Goa'uld are not the Gods they claim themselves to be. The Tau'ri are within a galaxy that's future is undetermined and unseen by all. Will they succeed against the darkness that threatens to consume them or will they vanquish the Goa'uld from the galaxy once and for all. With your help, perhaps this can be accomplished in time and with effort.
[MW]Goa'uld- The Goa'uld are more power hungry than ever, they seek to conquer the galaxy and rid themselves of the constant enemies which get within their way of their plans. With most of the Minor Goa'uld allying themselves with the System Lords. This can not mean anything good for their enemies and their hopes for ridding the galaxy off the Goa'uld once and for all. They pray on the weak and destroy all those that oppose them. They have on numerous occasions attempted to conquer Earth to finally crush the Tau'ri. However most of their attempts have failed and have ended with them being severely weakened. However time has now passed and they remain silent in the darkness plotting for their next attack. The only question is, who will it be and what side will you take in the battles and difficulties to come. Will you join the Goa'uld and aid the System Lords or will you roam the galaxy with your own needs in heart?
[MW]The Syndicate- They are a fairly new faction which has recently rose as another has fallen. They are attempting to gain themselves a place of power within the galaxy and in the process are attempting to dodge any battles until they are completely prepared for such times. Already their numbers are rising and already their fleets are extending. They are a pirate and mercenary faction. They work and help when there's a profit involved for themselves. They have no alliances as they change sides quicker than most would expect. They are highly unpredictable and work with money. If the price is right, they will aid in any way possible. After recently introducing themselves into the galaxy they have already crossed paths with the Goa'uld. For the time being they are keeping their distances from each other, but how long will it be until they too also become on the Goa'uld's enemies list. Do you have a thing for money and wealth. Perhaps then this is the faction for you. They go wherever the profit is and no matter what the cost, they will see they get their victory.
[P]Wraith- The Wraith have been doing what most would expect Wraith to do and this would be culling land they have under their control and feeding upon the humans that inhabit the planets they control. Of course they are beginning to receive more and more resistance from enemies, its becoming harder and harder for them to find humans they can easily take and feed upon. With their food levels running low they quickly take into action against their enemies to try and take over land which is not their own but instead is the enemies. They lurk in the shadows with dark intentions against Atlantis, they have tried and failed in the past to conquer the city, but they are adamant about taking control off the city which will then grant them access to Earth which is a rich feeding ground for their race. With this knowledge they quickly attack any that stand in their way for complete galaxy control. The only question is, will you aid them as they cull villages and slay their enemies and help them on their way to victory?
[MW][P]Independent- Do you believe yourself to be above the other factions? Do you refer yourself to be a lonely wolf who can only walk on one path and that one path is to be walked alone. Do you want the wealth and the rewards for yourself to keep. Are you the type which doesn't take kindly to orders or set assignments, then this is the faction for you. Your at your own freedom, to do as you please. You have no faction leader for who's words you need to follow. The galaxy is your playground, so what are you waiting for?
Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #31 on Oct 23, 2008, 1:11pm »
+ She nodded with acknowledgement, "Thank you Lieutenant," she breathed before he left. She thought for a moment when the communications officer interrupted her thoughts.
"There's a message from Starfleet for you, Captain," "I'll take it in my Ready Room, Ensign. thank you," "Yes Sir."
Joined: Jun 2008 Gender: Male Posts: 27 Location: Embry-Riddle (College) Karma: 0
Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #32 on Oct 22, 2008, 8:33pm »
Odan nodded. "Yes Sir. I well have the team keep this below the radar to the best of their ability."Odan paused and through if he needed to say anything else to the Captain. As he was about to turn around and leave he realized one more thing. "I well have a preliminary report for you by tomorrow at 0600 hours." This was not to bold of a statement, it was still early in the day, so Preliminary report would normally be submitted the next day. Once he was satisfied the captain had nothing left to say to him he turned and headed off the bridge. He headed towards the Science Lab, sense that is where the remains should have been sent.
Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #33 on Oct 22, 2008, 9:52am »
+ "I imagine it was... if no lives had been lost" she said softly, she did feel the comment a little cold but she held some understanding. Whilst bad things happen and they were never happy, one could still appreciate things about them. "I will have a team assigned to help you Lieutenant, unless you feel like doing that yourself. We will be supervising an Ambassador who's coming to stay for a while from planetside, so for the meantime, let's keep a low profile about the Dynamite untill necessary to reveal more light on the situation" she said to him. The planet she had mentioned was not directly near the base but it wasn't that far away. A few light years and not much more than that. +
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Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #34 on Oct 21, 2008, 9:06am »
Odan stood at attention as he spoke calmly to the Captain. "Yes sir. From what I could detect from the Mercury it was around a hundred seventy five kilograms of debris. Most was small piece only a few grams in weight, however I did notice a few good size pieces also were collected. Unfortunately that was about the total mass left of the Dynamite after the loss of anti-matter, it was one hell of an explosion." Odan closed his eyes, gritted and felt like slapping his head. He should have not said that last remark. It could have been taken the wrong way as though he was cold or heartless to the lost of the Dyamite's crew. This was not the case, but he had never met the Captain, so did not understand how she would take the comment.
Re: In the Lab « Result #35 on Oct 20, 2008, 4:13pm »
As Jonus returned to his Astrometrics lab, he turned on a few more consoles. Truth be told, he wasn't entirely sure why those consoles were there. They served no purpose other then to be backup main consoles. He reflected on the fact that he could do this job from just about any console in this room. It made him chuckle.
Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #36 on Oct 20, 2008, 11:52am »
+ Kunama smiled at the crewman before turning to acknowledge the Andorian waiting patiently. She smiled softly as listened and considered his request, "I think that is manageable, Lieutenant. Was Lieutenant Sharpe successful with the transport?" she asked, liking to remain knowledgeable on situations. +
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Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #37 on Oct 20, 2008, 6:41am »
Odan Thos walked off the turbolift on the bridge of Deep Space 12. He looked around in awe. The only space station she was Jupiter Station. It was nothing like Deep space 12, so he took it in for a second before he spotted the Captain. He walked up and placed his hands behind his back and waited for the captain to be finished for what she was doing. Once she was done he spoke up. "Sir, Lieutenant Odan Thos. I was the pilot of the Mercury when the Dynamite exploded. I wise to continue to be the one that analysis of the debris, sir." Odan spoke confidently as he looked Captain Kunama in the eyes. Odan knew he was not the strongest scientist on the station but he knew ships, and furthermore had thought his input could be valuable sense he took all the scans.
Re: System Patrol « Result #38 on Oct 13, 2008, 7:53am »
+ "Got ya, Lieutenant. See ya. Sharp out," the German replied and he then sort about having what he had brought over contained in case of anything bio or chemically unfriendly and sent to the appropriate housing. It was no longer his problem but he was still concerned. +
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Re: System Patrol « Result #39 on Oct 12, 2008, 9:26pm »
Odan nodded and pushed several buttons on the control counsel. "Copy that Lieutenant Sharp. See you when I get back." Odan then pushed another button on the counsel and then spoke again. "Shuttlecraft Mercery to Deep Space Twelve. Did you send out another shuttle to complete the patrol?" Odan waited and hoped they didn't, he wanted to be in the pilot’s seat a little longer.
After a second the voice of the flight chief's voice. "That is correct Mercery, return to base and report." The communication line shut down and Odan cursed under his breath. This was not what he needed to happen on his first patrol.
Odan fallowed orders and turned the Mercery towards Deep Space Twelve. It would be a short flight at full impulse and once he return he would have a mountain of paperwork to fill out.
Re: application: amebruz « Result #40 on Oct 5, 2008, 7:05pm »
I am afraid I cannot accept this as an application to the site.
Perhaps you were confused by how I explained it to you over the PM Service, but a Role Play plays more to the lines of say, this:
As borrowed from Odan Thos's Application
Code:
Holo-Deck Danger:
The console to the left of Odan Thos exploded filling the thingypit of the Danube class runabout with smoke and sparks.
“That hit took out our aft shields. One more hit and we are toast.” The young human sitting next to Odan Thos said over the sound of alarms.
Odan slapped his communicator. “Willam, what can you do about our shield situation.” Odan paused for a response but several seconds passed with nothing. “Willam. What are you doing back there.”
Another several seconds passed and Odan started to worry. He ordered the computer to pause the program but all the sounded was a strange three tone beep. It was a sound that Odan never heard before, he tried the order again. Once again the holo-deck only made the beep. He turned to Ralph who looked at him with a strangely. Just then a photon torpedo flew over the window of the runabout. Odan threw the ship into a tight turn and ordered Ralph to put all power in the forward shields then go find out what was going on with Willam. The young ensign fallowed the order then headed to the rear of the runabout. In a few second something Odan never wanted to hear came over the communicator.
“Lieutenant. Willam is hurt badly. I don’t know how long he got!” the voice very troubled and Odan knew that they where in trouble.
Odan after attempting to order the system to pause and calling for the exit; both time receiving the beep, Odan replied to Ralph. “Do what you can for him then get back up here.”
Odan realize there was only one way to get out of this situation, he would have to win the scenario or they may very well be killed in the holo-deck. He powered up the forward phase and headed towards the Klingon D-12 Bird of Prey. The tactic could very well be seen as a suicide attack, but it was out of desperation not choice. His only hope was the knowledge that Bird of Prey did not have shields while cloaked.
Ralph quickly ran up and slide into the seat next to him. “What do you need me to do sir.” His voice had a good amount of fear, most likely because he know that this scenario only had a twenty three percent success rate.
Odan looked over at the ensign, knowing that the best way to keep him calm was to keep him busy. “Pull up the schematics and any details on the D-12. I need targets which could destroy that thing with a photon torpedo.” Odan remain a calm voice, trying to put the boys mind at ease as he spun the ship around, avoiding the photon torpedoes and disruptor shots.
As Ralph marked the targets for the computer, Odan charge up an ionic pulse remembering the Enterprise-D was able to force a D-12 to cloak with on. When Ralph confirmed the targets, Odan engaged full thrusters and headed towards the Bird of Pray. As the runabout closed Odan launched three photon torpedoes, one at the bridge and two at the location that would hopefully cause the anti-mater containment to fail. As the missiles closed Odan held on hand over the ionic pulse and just before the missile reached their targets he activated it. Ralph and him watched as the three torpedoes struck the ship.
The ship exploded and Odan jumped out of his seat. “That is what I am talking about.” As the words came out of Odan’s mouth the holo-deck scenario ended.
Unfortunately Junior Lieutenant Willam Turner sub came to his injuries before Odan and Ralph could get him to sickbay. Odan personally wrote a letter by hand to send to the Turner family saying what a fine man Willam was and offering his deepest condolences. The letter brought a little peace, but would carry his death longer then any other person. The ship captain said the first death was always the hardest and the ship councilor tried to explain it was not his fault. Still Odan spent many nights after the holo-deck malfunction waking up covered in sweat; the D-12 and Willam hunting his dreams.
That is what we consider to constitute a role play sample. It's not a description of the plot as you have produced here. A plot is very different from a sample. My apologies if you didn't understand but I can't accept you on what you have declared (via PM) to be completed.
Which brings me to my second concern.
I would prefer that you branch out your character a little more, particularly for Strengths and Weaknesses, Hobbies and Interests, and History. I'm sorry, but I have stated in the Rules and Regulations of this site that we are a Semi-Literate Plus site. If you still wish to join with this character and application, it is highly recommended that you put more detail into the required fields, and use correct grammar and punctuation.
Until you update this application, I cannot accept you into our midst. I hope you do try again and work some more on this application.
application: amebruz « Result #41 on Sept 30, 2008, 2:32am »
Character Information:
Name: amebruz [b]Race: trill [b]Age: 380 [b]Gender: guest=male [b]Appearance: 1.85 cm hight, skiny [b]Role: starfleet officer [b]Job Description: starfleet officer [b]Strengths and Weaknesses: good at joking, not good with muscles, fast and agile [b]Hobbies and Interests: holographic dock, read, and talk [b]History: 9 lifetimes, 5 women and 4 men. got into many wars. guest's family dead.
[b]User Information:
[b]Name: amebruz [b]Gender: male [b]How long have you been role playing?: 1 year, but not here [b]What other sites do you role play on?: none [b]Role Play Sample: a guy who loves phisics, is trying to understand the relativity of einstein. very very lazy. likes science fiction and other ovies. listens to jazz music and rock music.
Re: A Hive Of Activity « Result #42 on Sept 29, 2008, 9:39pm »
+ Kunama sighed softly as she heard her crew busy about the Bridge. "So, have we any interesting visitors today?" she asked aloud and an officer peered up. "Not many, Sir. Mainly a few transport vessels and a select few other vessels." He replied, and she smiled hearing just how bored he sounded. It was also rather odd for a station to not have many vessels coming into dock. The facilities were usually a big attraction. +
Re: System Patrol « Result #43 on Sept 25, 2008, 6:47pm »
+ "Will do," he replied and the comms went silent again as Conrad brought whatever he could get a hold of back on to the station, slightly pausing to move things off the pad of the transporter. He had to get an Ensign under his department to help him with some of it due to its weight. " got most of what I can get a lock on, Lietuenant," he said, remaining professional. +
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Re: System Patrol « Result #44 on Sept 19, 2008, 7:53pm »
Odan rolled his eyes in the thingypit of the class to shuttle. He was in a EV suit already with the helmet sitting next to the chair. He pushed the communications button on the counsel, "Not at just sitting here running scans. Tell me how much you get." Odan was as polite as he could be, considering that Conrad was his bunkmate.
Re: System Patrol « Result #45 on Sept 17, 2008, 9:39am »
+ It was a long while after his last communique with Odan before he contacted him again, "Sharpe to Thos, hope you haven't twiddled for too long. I am now going to bring some of it aboard." he announced over the line. +
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Re: System Patrol « Result #46 on Sept 5, 2008, 5:12pm »
Odan just sat inside the shuttle. He had ran every scan that he sensor preform and now only needed the sample for the captain. "Copy that Sharpe, I well twiddle my thumbs a little longer." Odan sent back over the com-line. He never handle doing nothing well, already starting to bored. He headed straight for the EV Suit, getting in it would take his mind off of doing nothing.
Re: Klingon Attack! « Result #47 on Sept 3, 2008, 11:10am »
May I make a suggestion that we have a "Current and Previous Plots" board so that new members can find out what has happened/is happening, and things can't be repeated?
Cause I only read the board that are important to my characters... I never really like reading things that has nothing to do with my characters.
And seeing as before now no other plots have been thought of and no announcement been made (at least none that I have seen)... how are we supposed to know that there is a plot going on at the moment and a thread needing to be read? --- and besides, not all plots are necessary for everyone to be involved with.
I'm only going to say one more word "Communication".
Re: System Patrol « Result #48 on Sept 1, 2008, 12:39pm »
+ "Sharpe to Thos. I'm experiencing a little trouble at getting locks on the material. Give me a moment, I'm modifying variances," Conrad reported over the line. +
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