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Quite against standard protocols, Klingons come aboard under the guise of going to the communal facilities, they kidnap two people off the station. Meanwhile, the Senior staff are trying to determine ulterior reasons for the explosion of the human cargo vessel, the Dynamite.
Name: xgmx Race: Human Race Description: Age: 21 Gender: male Appearance: 135 pounds | 6 feet tall Role: Marine Job Description: defend Deep Space 12 Strengths and Weaknesses: good at just about everything Hobbies and Interests: going ont he SS Free History: Was born on Earth, parents live there, started job at age of 18.
User Information:
Name: Kevin McDonald Gender: male How long have you been role playing?: a few What other sites do you role play on?: SS Free Role Play Sample: Ya!
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
There are a few things you need to change about your application before it can be accepted:
1) What's you character's name? I can't see a human being called "Xgmx" 2) What does your character look like? Hair colour? eyes colour? and distinguishing features, like scars, etc. 3) Saying "good at just about anything" is very nearly making your character a mary-Sue/Gary Stu . please be specific on what they are good at and what they are not so good at. 4) The hobbies is for your CHARACTER not for yourself. 5) You need to have a much more detailed history... three or more paragprahs is preferred 6) You must have a role play sample so we can see just how good you are at role playing.
If this is an incomplete application and you are working on it then please put "Not Finished" or "WIP" in the thread title to that we know.
Going on the SS Free is a hobby of my character.
Thank you for at least submitting one but I am appalled to find this incomplete and the lack of detail.
1. I have not ever heard of a human being called "Xgmx" in past or present and I doubt the 23rd Century has that name either. The name doesn't even sound like a name. If he is a human, does he not have a surname too?
2. The lack of good Punctuation and Grammar is worrisome as well. Please revise.
3. Marines have plenty of jobs within the station and whilst they do help Security with defending the station, it isn't just what they do. You can wiki it or consult the pages on Startrek.com
4. WE DO NOT ALLOW MARY SUEs/GARY STUs CHARACTERS. Why? Because NO-ONE is perfect. You as a person have faults, and you most certainly do if you think you can get away with "Good at just about everything". Strengths and Weaknesses help to define a character. Take Escalus from Romeo and Juliet. He tries to rule fairly in the fair city of Verona but he fails in his methods of discipline. It what makes that character who they are. What are his strengths? What are his weaknesses? I want to see this revised or you will have no hope of becoming a full member of the site. it also proves to me that you have not fully read the Rules and Regulations. I would strongly advise you go and read them. They are set there for a good reason. Namely this application.
5. Hobbies and Interests... 5a. What is SS Free? and Is it REALLY viable in the Star Trek realm and its communications? 5b. How come this character doesn't have a variety. People don't just have one interest or hobby. Take me for example, I enjoy horse riding, reading, writing, drawing. I am partial to swimming and I watch Rugby. Hobbies and Interests constitute a quantity, not a singular. Revise.
6. Please elaborate on the appearance. Do remember you can use a celebrity to help you with this. Just mention who they are. Don't use an anime/manga or sketch drawn picture. Just remember to supply a written description as well.
7. Where was he born on Earth? Who are his parents and what do they do? What education did he receive? Did he have any siblings or is he a lonely child? Does he have any friends? Why did he decide to join the Marine Core? What officers in the Core had an effect on him? Where was he stationed before be attached to DS12? What happened in his past to make him who he is today? "Was born on Earth, parents live there, started job at age of 18." does NOT constitute a valid historic entry.
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8. State roughly how many in numbers. E.G. For 3-6 years. You don't have to state exactly how many, just a rough idea.
9. Just SS Free? No others? I'm somewhat skeptical of that.
10. Prove that you are even capable of Role Playing. We have provided Scenarios if you need a push in the right direction. "Ya!" is not even a correct response for this. All that proves is that you can speak or type, which believe me, does NOT make you look the slightest bit intelligent. Provide me a sample as the character you are applying for. Choose a scenario, place your character in it and write me something that goes with that chosen scenario.
11. Unfinished applications require a "WIP" / "Incomplete" in the board title.
Conclusion
As it stands, and if this is not revised to our expectations, this application has failed. If you do not revise it within the week, your account with us will unfortunately be terminated. I was glad to see your initial enthusiasm for join but unfortunately, the goods weren't so great. If you bear any questions, just ask either of us and we'll get back to you.
I'm afraid your "soon" was not up to the mark and your account with us will be terminated. Our reasons for the termination of your account is that your level of literacy is not up to the standards we have asked for, and you have failed to complete your application to the fullest extent and therefore not done your character any justice, in the time allotment we gave you. You have not notified me of a reason for delay and evidently you don't deem the application important enough to have posted within a week.
If you are thinking of rejoining DS12, I would strongly suggest you improve your literacy skills before you try. I won't accept you again if you try with the same level it is now, and the account IP address will be banned from being able to come onto this site.
P.S. Your account with the Sovereign's Continuum will also be deleted, along with any other posts you have made. And the same goes for DS12 too.
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